Firstly they said that my work was affective as they didn't even want to look at the "infection" poster, which show how my typeface works. However they said that the background didn't really go with the work and I should think about changing it to something that is not white.
The batteries was the most liked but quality of line was poor in some places and i should think about scanning my work it and touching it up on other programs, the positioning was another point raise and i should try and play the word on a different part of the page.
The last piece was "back of there heads" this was my least favourite piece but received good and bad criticisms, the main issue raised was that a darker like maybe should have been used and more detail in the hair.
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