Wednesday, 14 December 2011

Evaluation

1. What skills have you developed through this module and how effectively do you think you have applied them?


I have developed my illustration skills and applied it to all my briefs. I feel I have managed to create a range of styles throughout the module. I have learn to do more with my illustrations, rather that just an image I have learnt how to make use of them and not just be a 2D image.
 I have organised my time very well this module, knowing from week to week what needs to get done, this has left me calm and stress free. 


2. What approaches to/methods of research have you developed and how have they informed your design development process?


I have visited some Galleries in London and picked up leaflet and business cards from everywhere. The most inspirational research is when I went to Manchester Book Fair as I loved all the stalls and took so many business cards and look people up. I can see myself doing this in the future so I took in a lot of information.
As for the extent of my research, at the beginning of the modle I feel my research lacked, I was doing it but I wasn't looking far for inspiration or in much depth. At the time I felt that any research I did fro my 1st project would influence my work. However as the module went on, I picked up on the research. I found for my forth brief, we got good result because we spent time, researching many topics and researching in depth to our chosen topic.




3. What strengths can you identify in your work and how have/will you capitalize on these?


I can see that my work is not just a drawing or a pretty picture, but I am putting my work in to context, I believe my illustrations are strong, I have been working on my type skills but I can see they are not as good as some other people, I feel if I get the type write I could produce some really exciting work.
I am so impressed at myself with my organisation skills and not forgetting about one project so it fall behind but keeping them all up and running. I will follow the same structure in the future so I can get my best work done in the time available.


4. What weaknesses can you identify in your work and how will you address these more fully?


I can definitely see how my type and layout lets my work down so much, it really annoys me that I cant just get it as I thought with time it would become better, I really need to collaborate even if I dont like it. I seem to rush in to idea straight aways as I want to create images and it makes me feel like I am not behind, this means missing out vital research, I can definitely say that my ideas could have been better and pushed further if I hadnt of rushed straight in to drawing and creating and thought more about how far I can push the brief and what will make it exciting for myself to do rather than getting too repetitive and running out of ideas. I am going to stop rushing in to design in the future and choosing one idea and going with it, but think about what I really want to do and research.


5. Identify five things that you will do differently next time and what do you expect to gain from doing these?

  •  research in depth
  • think of the outcome and why I am designing the work
  • collaborate with someone who does type or get better myself
  • use more methods of printing- i always say I want to screen print and never do, and lazer cutting looks like fun,
  • make work that I want to buy myself or have myself

6.How would you grade yourself on the following areas: 


5= excellent, 4 = very good, 3 = good, 2 = average, 1 = poor

Attendance - 5 
Punctuality - 4
Motivation - 5 
Commitment - 4 
Quantity of work produced - 4 
Quality of work produced - 3
Contribution to the group - 4 




Monday, 12 December 2011

other ideas

in the shop there could be signs in other departments that let you know about the picnic and go looking for it.





Point of sale

I thought I would make a mock up of how the picnic could be displayed in the shop, I used a picture and traced it on illustrator. 







I added bunting and signs and kept the colours in context 

sale

I have now printed off all my boards an very happy with them. There is not long left now and I thought maybe I should do a one day brief. However i thought I would expand the marks and spencer brief and do some points of sale as I didnt get to create much for this project I only got to illustrate.
I found some photo that I look in marks and spencers for the last ycn brief and thought I would have a look if they were useful.







Below is a sign that would be found in M&S. It matches the theme of the picnic. I want to create a picnic counter to sell the picnic bags.

FINAL PRESENTATION BOARDS




Saturday, 10 December 2011

THE LOGO





Poster for Otley Run A2



A2 Poster for Roald dahl



MASK POSTERS A2





Making packaging

Stephanie designed to packaging and colours and then today we both cut out everything and assembled them.




 We bought real buns and scones to put inside the packaging.




Friday, 9 December 2011

Bookends

Made a mock up of bookends that you can buy with the set of books


comments of boards from crit

brief 4
Picnic

I didnt have a lot of information that I could put on these boards as I had all the illustrations done but Steph hadnt finished the logo or the packaging, I made them anyways but they hardly had any of the right images on




comments on boards from crit

Brief 3
ROALD DAHL
My thoughts 
Peers thoughts 




Thinner line
margins bigger between line and text
more detail
use alignment too to make items central

 I agree with all the comments given
Combine titles with the covers which is on the next board
too much going on



Product shots



Too long use better columns 

Thursday, 8 December 2011

board comments from crit

Brief 2
The Otely Run
My thoughts
Peers thoughts
illustrations here?
I think I prefer the title as it acts as an impact page.







Good range
Didnt get many comments, maybe this is a good thing. Still need to work on the type and layout.

Board comments from crit

BRIEF 1
MAKE ME A MASK
My thoughts
Peers thoughts
 Make most of front board
move line and name up. More spaces for text to breath
no bigger than 12 point
delete the hair line rectangle


I didnt see the hair line until it was pointed out so its a good job we had a crit
I thought we were meant to have an impact page where it is just the logo on the from page so I do not think I will change the front board





Need to cut line length, break boards up into columns 
One larger image than the others
smaller ones to the side to equal hierarchy  

I agree about having one larger image and the rest smaller

good range of products





From looking at other peoples boards in the crit I have realised I am pretty bad at making boards. I am definitely going to re-do them all and think about my layout and type.