Friday 9 December 2011

comments on boards from crit

Brief 3
ROALD DAHL
My thoughts 
Peers thoughts 




Thinner line
margins bigger between line and text
more detail
use alignment too to make items central

 I agree with all the comments given
Combine titles with the covers which is on the next board
too much going on



Product shots



Too long use better columns 

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