3 boards

Yesterday we had a crit where we had to bring 3 design boards with us. i found this session useful we first went through some of the things we would like to get out of the crit

1. is the work achievable?-time
2. is the work possible?- skills
3. further research-content, visual, technical
4. tone of voice? audience/context, subject matter, concept
5. the reality of content
6. appropriate concept
7. consider the whole problem

from my feedback I was told that my title wasn't right and maybe should have something to do with "imaginary" as the planets i am doing are not real

They also said i was creating 2 sorts of illustration and that i should stick to had drawn.

they also said that they were not too sure on the photo, but if i use them correctly they might work.